White Out

a mystery narrator that can't pronounce Petechiae

Narrator should be embarrassed - frankly I seldom listen to an audiobook that is error-free (the LEAST we, your audience, should accept / expect)!petechiae is pronounced PuhteakEI (sound out what I have typed EXCEPT the,last two letters, which are "long" - I guess I can't assume narrator will know what that means, so for the last 2 letters just pronounce each letter, "e" "I". if this makes no sense to you, then use the web and listen to the word pronounced (why don't narrators do this by DEFAULT when he or she doesn't know how to pronounce a word)? IThis is a word mystery fans have encountered often. I am so frustrated with authors and with Audible for settling for narration which contains errors. Contact ME, I can READ! I WOULD LOVE TO DO NARRATION, and I am a professional writer with decades of experience!!

7 people found this helpful

wouldn't recommend

struggled to finish. confusing. too many characters. characters actions are just too illogical. really?? nothing else to say.
seems like a very dumb rule to require 15 words

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This book needed an editor

The audiobook needed a more adept reader, also.
The story itself was terribly flawed, as if the author had 3 plot lines, each struggling to become the story and everybody lost. There is potential here but it needs a great deal more honing. I listened all the way through in the crazy hope that some things might be made clear but ended frustrated and impatient, This writer has promise, but she needs a great, and patient, editor. And as for the reader...if you take on the job if reading a book and get paid to do it, LOOK UP the unfamiliar words, please!

5 people found this helpful

not very tight

the story could have used better editing. because of this the climax was confusing . also, there where characters that when nowhere. I've liked other books of hers that I've read and will try others. the narrator was so so.

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Good story but

Good story, likable characters, but just a little difficult to believe. However, I did not regret that read it

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What an amazing story. Truly loved it.

Really enjoyed the book. Read it in <3 days. Loved the narration. The story line was wonderful. Definitely would refer this book to someone.

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Full of twists and turns

I enjoyed this story. It is well written and well narrated, although the "voices" was sometimes irritating, but mostly just kind of weird

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Outstanding!

This is a great book made even better by the wonderful performance of Whitney Dykhouse as the voices for Danielle Girard's characters.

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Not sure why I finished...

This narrator mispronounced so many words I couldn't focus on the story which was overcomplicated.

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Good storyline. But unforgivable performance

As a medical professional, listening to the narrative mispronounce numerous words was very irritating, annoying and distracting. The story is good. But it's unforgivable to mispronounce medical terminology. Look it up if you don't know.