This week on Radio FreeWrite, we do something a little different. Instead of writing to a new prompt, we bring in a finished draft and talk through what happens after the writing part is over. We listen to a complete short story together, then start dissecting it to figure out where it’s strongest and weakest points are. Then, we chat about how it might grow.

From there, the conversation wanders into line edits versus big-picture fixes, giving feedback without rewriting someone else’s voice, and how stories stretch and break when they grow from flash into something longer. This is how writers talk with each other behind the scenes, when we're sitting on overturned tractor tires deep in the Maine woods with a tin mug of shine in our hands. IYKYK

Anyway, whether you’re trying to revise your own work or figure out how to give better notes on someone else’s, we've got something for you here.

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The Cru dives deep into one deceptively small word with outsized consequences: had.

Before writing from the prompt fanfaron—a swaggering bully or cowardly boaster—we get into a lively craft discussion about the pluperfect tense (the “past of the past”). Why does it so often feels forced? How, as a writer, do you know it's actually doing meaningful work on the page? Murph makes the case against overusing had, PC breaks down how context can replace grammar, and Father Spud champions the musicality of the pluperfect in Southern oral storytelling.

Stories this week begin around the 16:30 mark.

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The Cru is joined by Carolyn, aka The Whisky Type, to chat all things writing, typewriter, and whisky related. We had a great conversation about the importance of sharing your work, and the joy common to cigars, whisky, and typewriters: they're all meant to be enjoyed slowly. After you tune in, be sure to check out Carolyn's website!

NB, stories begin around the 17:15 mark, and while they weren't sponsored by Lagavulin (yet!), like many a Scottish babe they owe some significant part of their inception to a dram of the golden stuff.

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In our 146th episode, the Cru gather for their annual yuletide retreat to Spliff's Christmas Cabin. There, we discuss hygge: the nordic word for coziness, conviviality, and joy. When a writer attempts to give their piece a vibe---a general impression, a feeling they want the reader to experience---how do they pull it off without it feeling saccharine? The last thing you want is your readers feeling pandered-to. We've got a bagful of tricks for you to try out, including some excellent advice from Spud regarding the use of tropes.

Stories begin around the 18:30 mark, and are exceptionally cozy. Except for one, which is terrifying.

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In this episode, The Cru chat about the frustrating demands of writing in the social media age. Modern authors are increasingly expected to build their own followings and endlessly promote themselves online—and that… just ain’t us. At the same time, PC scored his first contract through a Twitter contest, so the benefits of online interaction are real. Can writers be private, authentic, and still get published?

Join us live! Come write with us at Forest City Brewing on January 16th, 2026! Doors open at 7:30 (well, doors are open way before that, but we'll be there starting at 7:30) and recording will start around 8. We'll have a prompt ready for you to write and read into the show!

Stories this week start at the 12:40 mark.

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What does first person pov sound like with minimal use of "I" and "my?" The Cru conclude their series on points of view in fiction with a series of experimental pieces that push the common boundaries around points of view. This was our annual "Brekkie Eppie," too, so expect some breakfast talk (particularly about Sandwich's delicious cinnamon rolls).

Stories begin around the 2-:45 mark!

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In our penultimate episode on point of view in fiction, we load you up with omniscient narrator tips. We discuss everything from the Quran to Tolkien as we tackle third person omniscient in our craft discussion. When do you limit, and when do you embrace the godlike power of omniscience? What are the biggest traps writers fall into with omniscient narrators? We discuss it all.

And we have mulled cider, which was extremely pleasant for us, but I doubt it translates to audio particularly well.

Stories begin around the 17:10 mark and include

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Poet and podcaster Johna joins us to chat about writing, reading, and buying too many books. On her program, Booking It! With Johna, she interviews indie authors about the hustle and hurdles of life as a writer. We also cover the dangers of book stores (spoiler, Ohio has a ton of great ones), the anxiety of sharing drafts, and omnipresent impostor syndrome.

Check out Johna's book of poetry, My Lonely Love, too!

Stories begin around the 15:10 mark and include a voyeuristic gaze at a beach, an absurd political giant, shape shifters, and a return to Calamity.

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