Juvenile writing at best.

I couldn’t finish it. The storyline was ok but the writing was just ridiculous. Very repetitive and explained in detail every emotion. The narration was mediocre.

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Christian faith throughout story

Audible does a lousy job of indicating when a story has a strong religious theme. While the mystery and narrator were excellent, I got very tired of the Christian theme. While that may cause many to gasp, imagine if you were a chapter or two into a story and the main characters began to talk about their Buddhist, Hindi, or Muslim beliefs. I don't object to these stories being written, but I do think the religious theme should be indicated in the story synopsis intended to entice us to read it. While I know many would choose such a theme I see no reason why it shouldn't be announced except to hope that those of us who wouldn't appreciate it will get into the story enough to submit to it. I also think Audible could do a MUCH better job of indicated the religious theme on the title's page, not only that it's mystery/thriller.

Well worth reading or listening

Loved it. Had alot of mystery to it. It was also very funny. Bubbles made me laugh

Wonderful!

Shirlee McCoy has created a great story that I could not stop listening to and hate that it had to come to an end! I’m so glad Love Inspired books are being made into audiobooks now, and hope more will be released!

overall a good story

Although this was a pretty good story, and a story of faith I wish there would have been more talk of their faith then just see occasional reference. I felt like their faith was secondary to the overall story. the narrator was good and had no problem with following her into believing her voices were the actual characters.